Today:
Present first book BINGO topics
Conference with Mrs. B. AND revise
- What are your writing about?
- Why are you writing about this? Personal reason as well as intent for audience
Revision of your paper
- Delete at least 10 words. Look for unnecessary adverbs (ly/y)
- Rewrite opening lines one time- use dialogue, description, an original or new thought
- Replace at least three bland words- good, great, happy, sad, bad, new, old- with more descriptive words: uplifted, morose, sullen, decrepit
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